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[Mecha Magica! mini: Homerun]

Pretty good. The audio is the weakest part and likely comes down to experience. I'm sure you will keep getting better and better if you stick with it.

[Mehndi Laga Ke Rakhna]

What are they saying??? That isn't real werds.

Song 'Mehandi Laga Ke Rakhna' from movie 'Dilwale Dulhania Le Jayenge'.

--MALE CHORUS--
Yeh kudiyaan nashe diya pudiyaan
These girls are packets (doses) of intoxication

--FEMALE CHORUS--
Yeh munde gali de gunde
These boys are street ruffians

--MALE CHORUS--
Yeh kudiyaan nashe diya pudiyaan
These girls are packets (doses) of intoxication

--FEMALE CHORUS--
Yeh munde gali de gunde
These boys are street ruffians

--MALE CHORUS--
Nashe diya pudiyaan
Doses of intoxication

--FEMALE CHORUS--
Gali de gunde!
Street ruffians!

--MALE--
Oh o o o, oh o o o o
(Mehndi lagaake rakhna

Keep mehndi (henna) applied
Doli sajaake rakhna) - 2

Keep the wedding carriage decorated
Lene tujhe o gori aayenge tere sajna

To take you, oh fair one, your lover will come

--MALE CHORUS--
Mehndi lagaake rakhna
Keep mehndi applied

Doli sajaake rakhna
Keep the wedding carriage decorated

Oh ho, oh ho

--FEMALE--
Ho, o o o o o oh, aah aa aa aa aa aa aa aa
(Sehraa sajaake rakhna
Keep your wedding veil on

Chehraa chhupaake rakhna) - 2
Keep your face hidden

Yeh dil ki baat apne dil mein dabaake rakhna
Keep these words of your heart suppressed in your heart

--FEMALE CHORUS--
Sehraa sajaake rakhna
Keep your wedding veil on

Chehraa chhupaake rakhna
Keep your face hidden

--MALE CHORUS--
Mehndi lagaake rakhna
Keep mehndi applied

Doli sajaake rakhna
Keep the wedding carriage decorated

Hoye, hoye, hoye!

--FEMALE CHORUS--
Hoye, hoye, hoye!

--MALE--
Ud udke teri zulfein
Your hair, flying about

Karti hai kya ishaare
Is making such gestures

Dil thaamke khade hain
Clutching their hearts

Aashiq sabhi kunwaare
All the lovesick bachelors are standing

--FEMALE--
Chhup jaaye saari kudiyaan
All the girls hide

Ghar mein sharam ke maare
In the house from embarrassment

Gaaon mein aa gaye hain
Into the village have come

Paagal shaher ke saare
The crazy ones from the city

--MALE--
(Nazrein jhukaake rakhna
Keep your glances downcast

Daaman bachaake rakhna) - 2
Keep your embrace ready

Lene tujhe o gori aayenge tere sajna
To take you, oh fair one, your lover will come

--MALE CHORUS--
Mehndi lagaake rakhna
Keep mehndi applied

Doli sajaake rakhna
Keep the wedding carriage decorated

--FEMALE CHORUS--
Sehraa sajaake rakhna
Keep your wedding veil on

Chehraa chhupaake rakhna
Keep your face hidden

--CHORUS--
Oh oh oh oh oh, aah aah aah aah aah aah - 2

--MALE--
Main ek jawaan ladka
I am a youthful boy

Tu ek haseen ladki
You are a beautiful girl

Yeh dil machal gaya to
If this heart flip-flopped

Mera kusoor kya hai
Is it my fault?

--FEMALE--
Rakhna tha dil pe kaabu
You were supposed to keep control on your heart

Yeh husn to hai jaadu
This beauty (of mine) is magic

Jaadu yeh chal gaya to
If this magic was cast

Mera kusoor kya hai
Is it my fault?

--MALE--
(Rasta hamaara takna
Keep your eye on my path (in my direction)

Darwaaza khula rakhna) - 2
Keep the door open

Lene tujhe o gori aayenge tere sajna
To take you, oh fair one, your lover will come

--FEMALE--
(Kuch aur ab na kehna
Don't say anything else now

Kuch aur ab na karna) - 2
Don't do anything else now

Yeh dil ki baat apne dil mein dabaake rakhna
Keep these words of your heart suppressed in your heart

--MALE CHORUS--
Mehndi lagaake rakhna
Keep mehndi applied

Doli sajaake rakhna
Keep the wedding carriage decorated

--FEMALE CHORUS--
Sehraa sajaake rakhna
Keep your wedding veil on

Chehraa chhupaake rakhna
Keep your face hidden

--CHORUS--
Sha va oye, oye, oye - 4

Sha va oye, oye, oye - 8
Sha va

[Darnell Has a Crush]

Thought you were going somewhere different there.

I thought you were going to say that Darnell was the one that gave what's her face herpes...

Blowing her up is good too I guess. Solves the herpes problem and the suicide problem all at once.

[Hunt 4 Zombies]

Good animation but you should drop in a preloader.

Preloaders are really easy to drop in your flash. if you go to the submit content section and then the Flash Section right at the top the second link is to a downloadable preloader that you put on your first frame of your movie.

Good work overall though. The mother's voice was rather distorted though.

medli20 responds:

Thanks for the advice, but the truth is, my version of Flash is so ridiculously old, I can't even do that. *cries in emo corner*

All jokes aside though, thanks so much for the feedback! :D

[Mr. Literal]

Nice stuff. Preloader is a bit to much of a clue.

I liked it a lot. The preloader actually had me saying the last line as I hit play to watch it the first time though. :)

[Barbershop Quartet...]

Not extremely funny sorry.

It's ok and all, but not really funny enough, and you don't set up that the driver is the one breaking through the window very well.

[Fate of the Faye]

That is called rotoscoping.

Howdy! I like the effort here, though it seems that you took a video of someone and then drew over them to make the animation.

This can be good, but you have to stick more to the lines of the previous drawing that is what gives you the fluttery effect on your lines.

A good attempt just focus on cleaning up your linework a little more.

[Primal War : Him]

Good but just a montage of other work.

I enjoyed it but it is a mix of previous work. It's good but if you are just copying frames from previous animations it doesn't deserve as high of marks as the original release.

However yes good job on the animation. I can see a few places you have developed your skills over the time you have spent on the series.

Overall a nice recap of the development of the series but rehashed work so middle of the road marks.

Do you think viewers should watch this before or after watching the series?

[Monster's Dream]

Nice work!

Howdy! Nice to see you are still at this and are having sucess! That animatic stuff comes hin handy doesn't it?

Anyway good job on the backgrounds and syncing to the audio it worked quite well. I would have ended it with a bit more pinash or with him waking up but I really liked it.

animatorjones responds:

haha thanks man, it's been a while!

yeah thanks to you i started taking animation a little more seriously in terms of storyboarding and what not :D all from that one collab.

anyway thanks for the review, yeah i had planned to add scenes of him in the "reality" imitating what he was doing in the dream but when i played it through it was even more confusing... the end result would have been him waking up and then passing out again but i went a different route. anyway on to new things right?

thanks again man, you helped me out a ton way back when :3

-jones