JackSmack's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rebellion]

Not good... mostly bad... Good Effort.

Few redeeming qualities... The crying milk thing is funny... um... The attempt at action is quite good but the graphics Really take away from it.

I would like to say it's great.. but I would be lieing.. its on par with most of the stuff that gets blamed... sorry.

[Mr. Optimistic]

constructive ideas.

Well it's not the animations really that need work it's the drawings... I suggest you invest in a graphics tablet. I'm new to newgrounds but I'm not new to flash. With a graphics tablet you can get alot more control over your lines.
Also. if you smoothed your lines the file would be smaller and would look alot better. the cartwheels needed to have him more like a wheel than a board. spread his arms and legs next time.... thats about it for me I think.