JackSmack's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Contrast]

Impressive effort!

Hey I like this, the colors are a bit hard to swallow, perhaps you could have played with the saturation on them a bit so they didn't bleed so bad on monitors.

Overall great job and I forgive you for being a little late in submitting it. :)

JoSilver responds:

I try to do my best with the colors, I totally agree about the colors. I had to stare at it all longer than anybody.

Glad you liked it!

[Dress up Henry]

Reminds me of my first flash game.

Not to bad. Still have a lot to learn but you did make me smile with the ripping the head off bit. Keep expanding your skill set and don't take anyone telling you that you suck to heart.

People will be mean and nasty. Take it in stride and always work to stand out even if it's just a little bit from the crowd. Keep up the good work and keep on learning.

griffinsbeenbeheaded responds:

Thanks man, you're one of the few people on Newgrounds with a heart. We need more people like you.

[1M5K]

You are going to get a bad score...

You are exporting your music in the first frame when you linked it in the library. This makes your preloader useless and will cause people to blam you.

wagnerben responds:

it looks like my preloader is working though...how should i do it? besides linking the music from the internet?

and i don't think 3+ is a bad score...i'm happy with "not bad, in fact, i like it!"
=]

[Summer Roof Jumper]

Holy long unskippable intro batman!

Ok I'm writing this bit before I even play the game... If this was something I was just viewing not knowing if it was in a jam I would have quit in the intro... ok now I'm going to play the game.

Not a bad game for a jam though not a really unique one. 4.5 stars, rounded up to 5. Good Game Jam guys.

Nayhan responds:

We didn't really think about the intro and just put it in there, Thanks Jack.

[Super ping pong]

engine from flashkit but good job.

You made it your own that is good but I saw that engine on flashkit. It was open for download. you do let people change the look of the game but you really should give credit to the person who programmed the pingpong game. I mean what if you programmed it?

Sneifo responds:

Umm. this isn't downloaded engine, I have coded everything.

[Drawing Tutorial PC]

Hey nice tutorial!

I've seen 2 of your tutorials on here they are well done.. but there are just a few problems... mainly simiple things... with this tutorial It would be really cool to show ALOT of different poses... the samuri looks cool but he could be in a much more exciting pose. you talk about the parts of the body but don't touch on perspective very much... The drawing was good but could be alot better if it wasn't so symetrical... would be more interesting to look at.

PureCarnage responds:

I'll play around w/ a few more, hopefully dish out something really noteworthy.

[Coffee Guy]

you asked I did my best...

a = arm._y-_ymouse;
b = arm._x-_xmouse;
angleA = Math.atan2(a, b);
degrees = angleA/(Math.pi/180);
setProperty ("arm", _rotation, degrees);

I believe that will work... If not... play with it...

peanut-mx responds:

Thanks for your help