JackSmack's Reviews

[Mecha Magica! mini: Homerun]

Pretty good. The audio is the weakest part and likely comes down to experience. I'm sure you will keep getting better and better if you stick with it.

[Mehndi Laga Ke Rakhna]

What are they saying??? That isn't real werds.

Song 'Mehandi Laga Ke Rakhna' from movie 'Dilwale Dulhania Le Jayenge'.

--MALE CHORUS--
Yeh kudiyaan nashe diya pudiyaan
These girls are packets (doses) of intoxication

--FEMALE CHORUS--
Yeh munde gali de gunde
These boys are street ruffians

--MALE CHORUS--
Yeh kudiyaan nashe diya pudiyaan
These girls are packets (doses) of intoxication

--FEMALE CHORUS--
Yeh munde gali de gunde
These boys are street ruffians

--MALE CHORUS--
Nashe diya pudiyaan
Doses of intoxication

--FEMALE CHORUS--
Gali de gunde!
Street ruffians!

--MALE--
Oh o o o, oh o o o o
(Mehndi lagaake rakhna

Keep mehndi (henna) applied
Doli sajaake rakhna) - 2

Keep the wedding carriage decorated
Lene tujhe o gori aayenge tere sajna

To take you, oh fair one, your lover will come

--MALE CHORUS--
Mehndi lagaake rakhna
Keep mehndi applied

Doli sajaake rakhna
Keep the wedding carriage decorated

Oh ho, oh ho

--FEMALE--
Ho, o o o o o oh, aah aa aa aa aa aa aa aa
(Sehraa sajaake rakhna
Keep your wedding veil on

Chehraa chhupaake rakhna) - 2
Keep your face hidden

Yeh dil ki baat apne dil mein dabaake rakhna
Keep these words of your heart suppressed in your heart

--FEMALE CHORUS--
Sehraa sajaake rakhna
Keep your wedding veil on

Chehraa chhupaake rakhna
Keep your face hidden

--MALE CHORUS--
Mehndi lagaake rakhna
Keep mehndi applied

Doli sajaake rakhna
Keep the wedding carriage decorated

Hoye, hoye, hoye!

--FEMALE CHORUS--
Hoye, hoye, hoye!

--MALE--
Ud udke teri zulfein
Your hair, flying about

Karti hai kya ishaare
Is making such gestures

Dil thaamke khade hain
Clutching their hearts

Aashiq sabhi kunwaare
All the lovesick bachelors are standing

--FEMALE--
Chhup jaaye saari kudiyaan
All the girls hide

Ghar mein sharam ke maare
In the house from embarrassment

Gaaon mein aa gaye hain
Into the village have come

Paagal shaher ke saare
The crazy ones from the city

--MALE--
(Nazrein jhukaake rakhna
Keep your glances downcast

Daaman bachaake rakhna) - 2
Keep your embrace ready

Lene tujhe o gori aayenge tere sajna
To take you, oh fair one, your lover will come

--MALE CHORUS--
Mehndi lagaake rakhna
Keep mehndi applied

Doli sajaake rakhna
Keep the wedding carriage decorated

--FEMALE CHORUS--
Sehraa sajaake rakhna
Keep your wedding veil on

Chehraa chhupaake rakhna
Keep your face hidden

--CHORUS--
Oh oh oh oh oh, aah aah aah aah aah aah - 2

--MALE--
Main ek jawaan ladka
I am a youthful boy

Tu ek haseen ladki
You are a beautiful girl

Yeh dil machal gaya to
If this heart flip-flopped

Mera kusoor kya hai
Is it my fault?

--FEMALE--
Rakhna tha dil pe kaabu
You were supposed to keep control on your heart

Yeh husn to hai jaadu
This beauty (of mine) is magic

Jaadu yeh chal gaya to
If this magic was cast

Mera kusoor kya hai
Is it my fault?

--MALE--
(Rasta hamaara takna
Keep your eye on my path (in my direction)

Darwaaza khula rakhna) - 2
Keep the door open

Lene tujhe o gori aayenge tere sajna
To take you, oh fair one, your lover will come

--FEMALE--
(Kuch aur ab na kehna
Don't say anything else now

Kuch aur ab na karna) - 2
Don't do anything else now

Yeh dil ki baat apne dil mein dabaake rakhna
Keep these words of your heart suppressed in your heart

--MALE CHORUS--
Mehndi lagaake rakhna
Keep mehndi applied

Doli sajaake rakhna
Keep the wedding carriage decorated

--FEMALE CHORUS--
Sehraa sajaake rakhna
Keep your wedding veil on

Chehraa chhupaake rakhna
Keep your face hidden

--CHORUS--
Sha va oye, oye, oye - 4

Sha va oye, oye, oye - 8
Sha va

[Darnell Has a Crush]

Thought you were going somewhere different there.

I thought you were going to say that Darnell was the one that gave what's her face herpes...

Blowing her up is good too I guess. Solves the herpes problem and the suicide problem all at once.

[Contrast]

Impressive effort!

Hey I like this, the colors are a bit hard to swallow, perhaps you could have played with the saturation on them a bit so they didn't bleed so bad on monitors.

Overall great job and I forgive you for being a little late in submitting it. :)

JoSilver responds:

I try to do my best with the colors, I totally agree about the colors. I had to stare at it all longer than anybody.

Glad you liked it!

[Alvin's Alps]

I like it!

Hey nice job on this one! It's actually really enjoyable. The music got on my nerves a bit around "The Help of a Beast".

[Dress up Henry]

Reminds me of my first flash game.

Not to bad. Still have a lot to learn but you did make me smile with the ripping the head off bit. Keep expanding your skill set and don't take anyone telling you that you suck to heart.

People will be mean and nasty. Take it in stride and always work to stand out even if it's just a little bit from the crowd. Keep up the good work and keep on learning.

griffinsbeenbeheaded responds:

Thanks man, you're one of the few people on Newgrounds with a heart. We need more people like you.

[Fox-trot Fletcher]

I was looking through the audio portal to find a good song to use for my upcoming Kickstarter video. I think I just found it. Fantastic work! I'll be sure to give you credit on the video if I wind up using it.

steampianist responds:

Feel free to use it

[SP - Generic Dance Song 3 V4]

I'm wondering how it was used in april 2 years ago

So I don't know if I'm the only one who sees this but the heard in entries says this song was used in build angry faic... in April of 2008... Philadelphia, we have a bug. You might want to let the NG staff know about that.

Nice song... don't really have a lot to say other than that.

[The Lobby [Game 3]]

I love this loop Great work

Hey GREAT job on this loop. I really like the up beat orcestrial overtones. I hope I can use this loop in one of my next games it really seems to fit perfectly.

Zero123Music responds:

thanks alot :)

[Abobo vs All]

MechAbobo was so fun for me to bring to life. I really like this art and it makes me want a sticker. :D

SuperJeffoMan responds:

MechAbobo is great. All of the bosses are really cool. Thank you I appreciate it, and thanks for the awesomeness!

[ABOBOOM]

@BoMToons This one is pretty sweet.

[NO MERCY]

I like the unique character perspective of this.