Score: 5

"Pacing is way to slow even for a slow movie."

submission: Erik The Artist

date: December 17, 2004

Sorry but this was almost PAINFUL to watch... it took your character almost 60 seconds to walk across a room and open a door... if this had been a bigger plot point or perhaps had some dialog it would have been much better... but I have to take into account that this was fairly original... but... would be nice to have things presented a little more clearly... I don't have to understand it but it helps to see it. Your timing needs some work... that's about all I have to say on that end... sorry. No offence ment I'm just trying to give my honest opinion.

Score: 5

"the end was funny."

submission: Piano Man

date: December 17, 2004

the character looked pretty good but you should have actually animated his fingers playin the keys and also the sound was a bit soft... then at the end I had to turn it down...

Score: 4

"Nothing new really"

submission: fbf episode 2

date: December 17, 2004

I have seen this done alot before... seems like you can't come to newgrounds and not find one like this in the 50 recent submissions... Not that this is bad... but you arn't limited to dots on the screen... mix it up a little please... put your own twist on this stuff a little more... I did see alot of stuff in there that was pretty cool but you could have done more... I gave you a 3... but please... more originality... would have been a better score.

Score: 4

"I can kinda tell what's happening here..."

submission: Super Smart Man - Ep 1

date: December 15, 2004

Yep.. You saw my tutorial. People are gonna get on you for this stuff... just slap my name in there with a thanks and you won't have any problems.

Score: 7

"I liked it..."

submission: Lam 3

date: December 15, 2004

Well... this is a quality submission... though some on newgrounds would say HEY THAT'S JESUS TALK HOW DARE YOU!!! These are the same people who are giving CHRISTmas cartoons high scores... I see nothing wrong with people on newgrounds putting things like this up... Some people BELIEVE it is a good idea to put up a picture of someone getting stabbed... others put even more sick and twisted animations on here... and people complain so hypocriticaly about someone taking the OTHER EXTREME. To everyone who says This shouldn't be here I say THIS IS BETTER than alot of the things that come through the portal every day... and I think due to artistic merrit and design it deserves it's place... just like animations that are secular in nature.

Well... I guess that gives a little info about me out... yep I'm a christian... how bout them apples?
Jack.

Score: 6

"Well I haven't seen a parody of one of those..."

submission: Jungle Liberator

date: December 15, 2004

I can honestly Say I have not seen one of these before... but if it's a parody you should put alot more humor in it... you know like have them go through a gunbattle and then fix lunch or something... the problem here was you did too good of a job and I thought it was a real game demo... was just about as entertaining as watching the real thing... and honestly that doens't make great flash... but the idea is a good one.

Score: 7

"Not bad... much better quality!"

submission: Homecoming (part 1)

date: December 15, 2004

I know I talked to you the last time I saw this... You did a much better job on the quality... I think that is about as good as you can expect... Anyway I liked it.. the pencil test is a little hard to see though... did you ever think of running over it in flash to pull it out more?

Anyway not bad... definately better.

Score: 4

"HEY! I recognize that explosion!"

submission: The Ho Down S.E.

date: December 15, 2004

WOOOOHOOOO! I had to watch this a bunch but I like how you use the effect... I liked your cartoon too the beginning with the black was good... the coloring in was a bit choppy... would have been better to have the color kinda bubble in from his mouth but all in all a good effort.. you are the first person I've seen who has used my stuff... I know you drew it over again, good job! Worked great! thanks for watching my tutorial and good job here... pretty funny.

Score: 7

"Hey nice tutorial!"

submission: Drawing Tutorial PC

date: December 14, 2004

I've seen 2 of your tutorials on here they are well done.. but there are just a few problems... mainly simiple things... with this tutorial It would be really cool to show ALOT of different poses... the samuri looks cool but he could be in a much more exciting pose. you talk about the parts of the body but don't touch on perspective very much... The drawing was good but could be alot better if it wasn't so symetrical... would be more interesting to look at.

Score: 7

"This is pretty Cool... would like to see more."

submission: The Cheese is Evil!

date: December 12, 2004

Hey! THUMBS UP! Looks good, sounds good, Pretty funny and can't wait for more.

Just a few things bothered me. I wish the cheese was not just a circle... it looked more like a coaster than cheese... would be great to have a cheese BALL instead of a slice...

Cause in my opinion all Cheese balls are evil...

GOOD WORK... 4 of 5